Sophie

Painting \ Figure | 06/12/06 @686 | annette | critiques (7) | views (373)

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This is my first proper go at painting a portrait :0)

It has taken me sometime, its not great but i will keep practicing lol and i am fairly happy with the results

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Banshee-Queen

06/12/06 @693

Ivanuss

06/12/06 @756

The result looks nice, but i think it stills needs a lot of work. But if its a starting point then is very good.
+7

TheKing78

06/12/06 @766

It looks like a bit unfinished and there are some issues (the eye behind the hair is too next to the noose) but I like the overall result.
+5/7

monique

06/12/06 @929

overall i think its good, i espcially like the long nail

but i agree with the king on the eye behind the hair, also its smaller than the other eye

Gune

06/13/06 @318

all in all really nice, but some parts are looking flat...and it looks unfinished... just a bit

Gune

06/13/06 @318

all in all really nice, but some parts are looking flat...and it looks unfinished... just a bit

Kaduflyer

06/13/06 @509

The problem with the eye looks as though it's been caused by trying to add the eye after the hair...desperately trying to squeeze it in within the limited space.
Plot out all the major features, eyes, nose, mouth and ears at the drawing stage..once you are happy with them leave them alone...they cant move!...THEN add the hair...hair is a shifting feature so it is THAT that you must arrange to suit your purposes!

Watch your colour palette...this is a little drear and dull...and also your tonal range...you have background, midground and foreground tones all identical...you need contrasts for both delineation of detail and dramatic effect.

The hair is not bad...but it lacks weight...hair this long tends to pull itself straighter, yours looks a little 'floaty'.

Not at all bad for your first stab at a portrait...keep at it and the next will be better.

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Sophie

Painting \ Figure | 06/12/06 @686 | annette | critiques (7) | views (373)

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